The Poetry Shoppe. Can you please suggest ways to improve this?

You are a master of fun. This is so creative, touching, funny and yes, sad as it can be. I have found a place here and I like to frolic with those I consider friends. Screw the doctor's that say get away from the virtual zombies and find real people- I have "real" people in my life and they have a part of me but if I want to give a piece of my soul to anybody it would be here, but here I run into being reported deleted and censored; sounds like real life to me. Love you Cheese!!